One dark gloomy night an alien appeared at a concert. He smashed the popcorn store and took it all!
So we followed, him me and Chloe fell down a hole it was so dark. Suddenly there was a bright light in the hole. Inside the hole it was sticky and muddy. the light was a torch held by two gnomes one called Thomas and the other called Ashton. "Hello" said Ashton "Hello" said Thomas. They copied each other! An owl flew in and perched on my head!
Do you know what the monster was? What was the light? This is amazing , I like how you described your story.
ReplyDeleteYou painted a picture in my mind with your details, Hayley; great job!
ReplyDeleteYour a really good writer!!! And thats a really cool story!!!
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